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Should love spring also with Spring!? Here birds and herds art all so whisp'ring; O all recall the bliss that thee Bliss brings! Dale and combe, do entertain, o'erdue regales; Sweet pipings piped twain boon nightingales; Here a throng hears; here a throng sings. A-strutting didst he; a ditzy strutter e'er go. Gone so long•each to each•  is each woe, O what if ten -steal gentle, O Woodruff!? What if ten by hundred do so flee to steal away, Lest the sadness's of Winter's existence thee allay, SO would an woodland rill still rill all it could've?
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Jan 10, 2017
Jan 10, 2017 at 12:37 AM UTC
Dues Ode
Should love spring also with Spring!? Here birds and herds art all so whisp'ring; O all recall the bliss that thee Bliss brings! Dale and combe, do entertain, o'erdue regales; Sweet pipings piped twain boon nightingales; Here a throng hears; here a throng sings. A-strutting didst he; a ditzy strutter e'er go. Gone so long•each to each•  is each woe, O what if ten -steal gentle, O Woodruff!? What if ten by hundred do so flee to steal away, Lest the sadness's of Winter's existence thee allay, SO would an woodland rill still rill all it could've?
Class: Irregular Ode Tone: Positive with a tinge of Negatives The Argument: Questioning if looking for Love in the brightest of places; "Nature" in the best of times, with the worst of Luck is a good idea. Woodruff is a type of plant, but also the name of the Protagonists dog Double entendres throughout/ Wordplay in Title, and in the phrases, especially the phrases italicized such as: "Steal Gentle"(quietly sneak off or leave; or if you prefer dark Poetry it could mean die without a fight, "second meaning inspired by "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night" by Dylan Thomas ) & "Woodruff"  "Steel" being opposite of "Wood" and "Gentle" being opposite of  "Rough" /Selfsame Word Pairs also present Check out the Capital letters on the left: Shod **** Owls
jamie-l-cantore
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Jan 10, 2017
Jan 10, 2017 at 12:37 AM UTC
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