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the art of poetry     like any art produces better work when writers are not only erudite but also smart the lovers' painful state upon loss or desertion is voiced much more impressively with less dramatic flourish and more of the grate that finishes the sword at the old blacksmith's fire where the hot flame of our desire     thrown into water with a defiant hiss turns into deadly steel ready to **** and ******      friend or foe or lover in our desperate search      for exits from the mire or take the unexpected loss     of victory that seemed so close     on a wild battlefield when suddenly the hero's gallant steed     falls victim to a hostile archers shot and its proud rider is reduced to shout "A kingdom for a horse!" rather than holding a long monologue     about the treachery of fate in  short less is oft' more and lets the readers fill the empty spaces with their own images and graces
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Jan 14, 2016
Jan 14, 2016 at 5:23 PM UTC
art of poetry
the art of poetry     like any art produces better work when writers are not only erudite but also smart the lovers' painful state upon loss or desertion is voiced much more impressively with less dramatic flourish and more of the grate that finishes the sword at the old blacksmith's fire where the hot flame of our desire     thrown into water with a defiant hiss turns into deadly steel ready to **** and ******      friend or foe or lover in our desperate search      for exits from the mire or take the unexpected loss     of victory that seemed so close     on a wild battlefield when suddenly the hero's gallant steed     falls victim to a hostile archers shot and its proud rider is reduced to shout "A kingdom for a horse!" rather than holding a long monologue     about the treachery of fate in  short less is oft' more and lets the readers fill the empty spaces with their own images and graces
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Jan 14, 2016
Jan 14, 2016 at 5:23 PM UTC
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