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I can’t really say when, I don’t really know why. The intruder came in like a cat through the backdoor in a rainstorm — sly, cunning, armed with charms and other soft weapons, seeking refuge and love in a new home. Not without hesitation, we took the intruder in — it looked harmless, as though it could pose no threat in the world. We gave it shelter, and it promised love. I made the mistake of giving the intruder you. As time went on, I became a spectator to my own life. Things once familiar became as useful to me as shredded paper. In just a few weeks, a home I had spent years to build — my own familiar space — lay shattered, broken into shambles. Never did I think I’d let an intruder live my life, while I stood on the sidelines, watching scenes unfold from a third-person point of view.
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Nov 4, 2025
Nov 4, 2025 at 9:13 AM UTC
Intruder
I can’t really say when, I don’t really know why. The intruder came in like a cat through the backdoor in a rainstorm — sly, cunning, armed with charms and other soft weapons, seeking refuge and love in a new home. Not without hesitation, we took the intruder in — it looked harmless, as though it could pose no threat in the world. We gave it shelter, and it promised love. I made the mistake of giving the intruder you. As time went on, I became a spectator to my own life. Things once familiar became as useful to me as shredded paper. In just a few weeks, a home I had spent years to build — my own familiar space — lay shattered, broken into shambles. Never did I think I’d let an intruder live my life, while I stood on the sidelines, watching scenes unfold from a third-person point of view.
how my life was taken from me
loneheart
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16/F/anywhere i feel comfort
Nov 4, 2025
Nov 4, 2025 at 9:13 AM UTC
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