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If torrents could run through rivers of the old, I’d surrender my being and let them take hold of my mind, this body, the time that’s been told— and traded in alleys dim, fetid, and cold. If torrents could alter, harden into growth, like a leash wound tight around my ankles, biting with cold, I wouldn’t thrash or resist. I would stay afloat, waiting for sunlight, for devotion, for hope.
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Dec 23, 2025
Dec 23, 2025 at 7:41 AM UTC
Surrender
If torrents could run through rivers of the old, I’d surrender my being and let them take hold of my mind, this body, the time that’s been told— and traded in alleys dim, fetid, and cold. If torrents could alter, harden into growth, like a leash wound tight around my ankles, biting with cold, I wouldn’t thrash or resist. I would stay afloat, waiting for sunlight, for devotion, for hope.
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Dec 23, 2025
Dec 23, 2025 at 7:41 AM UTC
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