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Moving house

The reality of moving creeps over

Like a moorland mist

It promises a wonderful day at the end

But now fogs our vision and our thoughts

Planning is futile as the rescue party

Has other ideas, on time and importance

Each footstep feels heavy.

The light is dim and those guiding

Are studying a different map.

Destination certain but not the route

The days tick by and mist clears in places then comes down far worse than before

The energy travelling seems harder

As the hidden gateways have lost keys

To unpick is pointless and puzzling

If you're lucky your resolve pays off as the moorland's beauty is revealed on the horizon.

Suddenly your heart is lifted as the final mile is in sight. Then you twist your ankle and rest is required.

The journey amongst the cruel mist is challenging as the cold clammy fingers try to strangle you.

Reaching the end is filled with hurdles as the time is inflicted upon you. Carrying your load is hardest as the fine weather reverts to cloud and rain.

Shelter is at last with you but the stairway up is steep and winding.

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max-hale
English
Published
Jan 31, 2020
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Our .moving suffering felt just like this

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