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I don’t let people that put me down be part of my life.   Gardens and trees, My shadow sunk in the grass in my yard As I ate bread, turmeric and lemon. Carbon crystallizes into graphite flakes. I write to see well, Graphite on paper.   A shadow on rock tiles with a shield, a diamond and a bell Had me ***** to humiliate me. Though I don’t let people that put me down near me, A lot of people putting me down seemed like they were following me, A platform to jump from While she had her temple.   There was a pink door to the platform. I ate bread with caramelized crusts and Drank turmeric lemonade Before I opened that door, Jumped and Descended into blankets and feathers. I found matches and rosin For turpentine to clean, Dried plums and licorice.   In the temple, In diamonds, leather, wool and silk, She had her shield and bells, Drugs and technology, Thermovision 210 and Minox, And an offering box where people believed That if their coins went in Their wishes would come true. Hollyhock and smudging charcoal for work,   Belled, I ground grain in the mill for the bread I baked for breakfast. The bells are now communal bells With a watchtower and a prison, Her shield, a blowtorch and flux, Her ex rays, my makeshift records Because Stalin didn’t like people dancing, He liked them divebombing. Impurities in the carbon prevent diamonds from forming, Measured, The most hard, the most expensive, But graphite’s soft delocalized electrons move.
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May 25, 2021
May 25, 2021 at 7:17 PM UTC
Flakes (May 25, 2021)
I don’t let people that put me down be part of my life.   Gardens and trees, My shadow sunk in the grass in my yard As I ate bread, turmeric and lemon. Carbon crystallizes into graphite flakes. I write to see well, Graphite on paper.   A shadow on rock tiles with a shield, a diamond and a bell Had me ***** to humiliate me. Though I don’t let people that put me down near me, A lot of people putting me down seemed like they were following me, A platform to jump from While she had her temple.   There was a pink door to the platform. I ate bread with caramelized crusts and Drank turmeric lemonade Before I opened that door, Jumped and Descended into blankets and feathers. I found matches and rosin For turpentine to clean, Dried plums and licorice.   In the temple, In diamonds, leather, wool and silk, She had her shield and bells, Drugs and technology, Thermovision 210 and Minox, And an offering box where people believed That if their coins went in Their wishes would come true. Hollyhock and smudging charcoal for work,   Belled, I ground grain in the mill for the bread I baked for breakfast. The bells are now communal bells With a watchtower and a prison, Her shield, a blowtorch and flux, Her ex rays, my makeshift records Because Stalin didn’t like people dancing, He liked them divebombing. Impurities in the carbon prevent diamonds from forming, Measured, The most hard, the most expensive, But graphite’s soft delocalized electrons move.
I wrote this for a contest on commaful.
MeenaMenon
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42/F/Santa Monica
May 25, 2021
May 25, 2021 at 7:17 PM UTC
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