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On the platform rolled the morning train, I arched into position like a predator on the prowl, I jumped into the rake and sustained a sprain, and like a wounded dog began to howl. I bought myself to stand and staggered towards an empty seat, as hundreds rushed through the compartment door, I dint get a seat, but space enough for my feet, and that's when my phone clattered onto the floor. I dived into the mammoth crowd, and began to ***** unsuspecting toes, Several people yelped out loud, and i sustained a few hard blows. Wounded and abashed i almost gave up the search, when the phone came into my hand, with relief i grabbed it amidst a jolt and lurch, but soon realized I couldn't bring myself to stand. I sat crouched on my fours, and soon developed knee sores, The crowd was so large, I couldn't squeeze through them all, and to my horror, other phones began to fall. Soon, we were quite a gathering, all perched on our knees, merrily discussing the Lokpal bill and the Cricket match in West Indies, We were soon forced to balance on a single toe, as the crowd began to grow even more. After an uncomfortable half an hour,I brought myself to stand, with delicate ease on the platform I managed to land. Fighting against the oncoming crowd i pushed through with a shove and **** dusting myself here and there I made my way to work.
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Jun 16, 2014
Jun 16, 2014 at 7:08 AM UTC
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On the platform rolled the morning train, I arched into position like a predator on the prowl, I jumped into the rake and sustained a sprain, and like a wounded dog began to howl. I bought myself to stand and staggered towards an empty seat, as hundreds rushed through the compartment door, I dint get a seat, but space enough for my feet, and that's when my phone clattered onto the floor. I dived into the mammoth crowd, and began to ***** unsuspecting toes, Several people yelped out loud, and i sustained a few hard blows. Wounded and abashed i almost gave up the search, when the phone came into my hand, with relief i grabbed it amidst a jolt and lurch, but soon realized I couldn't bring myself to stand. I sat crouched on my fours, and soon developed knee sores, The crowd was so large, I couldn't squeeze through them all, and to my horror, other phones began to fall. Soon, we were quite a gathering, all perched on our knees, merrily discussing the Lokpal bill and the Cricket match in West Indies, We were soon forced to balance on a single toe, as the crowd began to grow even more. After an uncomfortable half an hour,I brought myself to stand, with delicate ease on the platform I managed to land. Fighting against the oncoming crowd i pushed through with a shove and **** dusting myself here and there I made my way to work.
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Jun 16, 2014
Jun 16, 2014 at 7:08 AM UTC
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