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Art Bouchard, My father, Never marched a drill, Nor fired an angry shot... Recounted fond memories I've heard so many times: How long ago, when I was very young, He and our neighbor, Art Pribnow, Up before the sun, Engaged in tractor battles (Dad was very sure he won). My father woke those mornings, Early 1960s, With the popping cough of Worn diesel pistons Clattering out white smoke... Then blue and black, As engine heat and friction Tightened gaps, Sealed compression, And the motor steadied into an even roar. Across the county road Our only neighbor led or followed suit, Sending smoke and sound To drown the morning songs of meadowlarks and robins. Fifty years later, Dad laughed in recollection, "We started rising just a little Earlier each day. Started up our tractors In a sort of game Called, 'Who's out first?'" Six became a quarter of, Then five-thirty backed to four. One tractor or the other roared, Early and then earlier To be the first to pull Into the waiting fields. When three-thirty came around My mother shook her head, But if she said a word, I never heard. These battling neighbors Even started engines up Before they ran, Milking buckets swinging, to their barns to chore As early became earlier in the little farmers' war. One day in town, By happenstance, A meeting came between the two. My father, being younger, Had energy for more, But old Art Pribnow shook his head, Grabbed my dad's hand and said, "Let's stop this foolishness Before one of us is dead! I don't know about the hours you keep, Or what got in our heads, But I admit, I need my sleep!" The farmer battle ended then. A hand shake and a smile Between two farmer friends, Created country lore, Remembered here a little while, As, "The Early, Earlier War."
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Jun 20, 2014
Jun 20, 2014 at 9:04 PM UTC
Early, Earlier War: Battling Farmers
Art Bouchard, My father, Never marched a drill, Nor fired an angry shot... Recounted fond memories I've heard so many times: How long ago, when I was very young, He and our neighbor, Art Pribnow, Up before the sun, Engaged in tractor battles (Dad was very sure he won). My father woke those mornings, Early 1960s, With the popping cough of Worn diesel pistons Clattering out white smoke... Then blue and black, As engine heat and friction Tightened gaps, Sealed compression, And the motor steadied into an even roar. Across the county road Our only neighbor led or followed suit, Sending smoke and sound To drown the morning songs of meadowlarks and robins. Fifty years later, Dad laughed in recollection, "We started rising just a little Earlier each day. Started up our tractors In a sort of game Called, 'Who's out first?'" Six became a quarter of, Then five-thirty backed to four. One tractor or the other roared, Early and then earlier To be the first to pull Into the waiting fields. When three-thirty came around My mother shook her head, But if she said a word, I never heard. These battling neighbors Even started engines up Before they ran, Milking buckets swinging, to their barns to chore As early became earlier in the little farmers' war. One day in town, By happenstance, A meeting came between the two. My father, being younger, Had energy for more, But old Art Pribnow shook his head, Grabbed my dad's hand and said, "Let's stop this foolishness Before one of us is dead! I don't know about the hours you keep, Or what got in our heads, But I admit, I need my sleep!" The farmer battle ended then. A hand shake and a smile Between two farmer friends, Created country lore, Remembered here a little while, As, "The Early, Earlier War."
I remember with a smiling sadness this story told by my father, now gone two years, about a little "friendly war" he and our neighbor, Art Pribnow, engaged in during spring planting time. The year would have been around 1959 or 1960, when I was just a baby. The story still makes me smile. I hope you enjoy it.
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Jun 20, 2014
Jun 20, 2014 at 9:04 PM UTC
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