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i went to a party, mom i remembered what you said you told me not to drink, mom so i drank soda instead i felt really proud inside, mom the way you said i would i didn't drink and drive, mom even though the others said i should i know i did the right thing, mom i know you're always be right now the party is finally ending, mom as everyone drives out of sight as i got into my car, mom i knew id get home in one piece because the way you raised me, mom so responsible and sweet i started to drive away, mom but as i pulled onto the road, the other car didn't see me, mom and it hit me like a load as i lie here on the pavement, mom i hear a policeman say the other guy is drunk, mom and now i'm the one who will pay i'm lying here dying, mom i wish you'd get here soon how come this happened to me, mom? my life burst like a balloon there is blood all around me, mom most of it is mine i hear the paramedic say, ill be dead in a short time i just wanted to tell you, mom i swear i didn't drink it was the others, mom, the others didn't think he didn't know where he was going, mom he was probably at the same party as i was the only difference is, mom he drank and i will die why do people drink, mom? it can ruin your whole life i'm feeling sharp pains now, mom pains just like a knife the guy who hit me is walking, mom i don't think it's fair
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Jan 22, 2016
Jan 22, 2016 at 9:41 AM UTC
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i went to a party, mom i remembered what you said you told me not to drink, mom so i drank soda instead i felt really proud inside, mom the way you said i would i didn't drink and drive, mom even though the others said i should i know i did the right thing, mom i know you're always be right now the party is finally ending, mom as everyone drives out of sight as i got into my car, mom i knew id get home in one piece because the way you raised me, mom so responsible and sweet i started to drive away, mom but as i pulled onto the road, the other car didn't see me, mom and it hit me like a load as i lie here on the pavement, mom i hear a policeman say the other guy is drunk, mom and now i'm the one who will pay i'm lying here dying, mom i wish you'd get here soon how come this happened to me, mom? my life burst like a balloon there is blood all around me, mom most of it is mine i hear the paramedic say, ill be dead in a short time i just wanted to tell you, mom i swear i didn't drink it was the others, mom, the others didn't think he didn't know where he was going, mom he was probably at the same party as i was the only difference is, mom he drank and i will die why do people drink, mom? it can ruin your whole life i'm feeling sharp pains now, mom pains just like a knife the guy who hit me is walking, mom i don't think it's fair
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Jan 22, 2016
Jan 22, 2016 at 9:41 AM UTC
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