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11-11-11- past 11a.m. I missed it. I wanted for me what happened to my friend in Australia She was walking down the street and at 11-11-11- 11a.m. almost everyone around her took a bow to such powerful numbers 11-11-11-11a.m. (Perhaps we shall be saved she said) Today, my 11-11-11, I was shopping for my lovers feast; Hummus and crispy organic veggies Fresh beets and pure ****** olive oil Local goat cheese to die for My phone alarm rang letting me know it was 11:10 (I did not hear it) as I was talking to Max my grocer About: Just picked Arugula and sweet Irish butter (To mound a top San Francisco sour dough) He hinted to me not to miss out On: Butternut squash and meaty pomegranates "A lucky omen" he said, "on a day like today." “What do you mean A day like today?” I said “Well it’s 11-11-11” he smiled “Oh my goodness” I faintly cried (almost too loud), “I missed it!” (I saw the time on the wall where I was shopping) “Missed what?” he said "Missed out on experiencing 11-11-11-11.a.m." “Oh my dear you missed nothing”, he said as he reached toward me with A huge ripe pomegranate. I felt flush from wanting something that now seemed so gone. “No”, Max pointed out, “you have more than feeling a set of numbers In the movement of the day”, “You were here planning a feast for a loved one (yes I told him it was a lovers dinner) What could be more in acknowledging the power of life Than love?” I said nothing as I beamed and took that pomegranate and Ohhhh I felt so good. Linaji 2011 (an almost true story)
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Nov 11, 2011
Nov 11, 2011 at 6:05 PM UTC
Past ~11-11-11-11 a.m.
11-11-11- past 11a.m. I missed it. I wanted for me what happened to my friend in Australia She was walking down the street and at 11-11-11- 11a.m. almost everyone around her took a bow to such powerful numbers 11-11-11-11a.m. (Perhaps we shall be saved she said) Today, my 11-11-11, I was shopping for my lovers feast; Hummus and crispy organic veggies Fresh beets and pure ****** olive oil Local goat cheese to die for My phone alarm rang letting me know it was 11:10 (I did not hear it) as I was talking to Max my grocer About: Just picked Arugula and sweet Irish butter (To mound a top San Francisco sour dough) He hinted to me not to miss out On: Butternut squash and meaty pomegranates "A lucky omen" he said, "on a day like today." “What do you mean A day like today?” I said “Well it’s 11-11-11” he smiled “Oh my goodness” I faintly cried (almost too loud), “I missed it!” (I saw the time on the wall where I was shopping) “Missed what?” he said "Missed out on experiencing 11-11-11-11.a.m." “Oh my dear you missed nothing”, he said as he reached toward me with A huge ripe pomegranate. I felt flush from wanting something that now seemed so gone. “No”, Max pointed out, “you have more than feeling a set of numbers In the movement of the day”, “You were here planning a feast for a loved one (yes I told him it was a lovers dinner) What could be more in acknowledging the power of life Than love?” I said nothing as I beamed and took that pomegranate and Ohhhh I felt so good. Linaji 2011 (an almost true story)
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Nov 11, 2011
Nov 11, 2011 at 6:05 PM UTC
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