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@!@!@ When you feel your mind Leave your body All you have left is your soul. @!@!@ 11 years of schooling went from me Along with puberty, those spotty years And all the young women I loved during those tears. @!@!@ And yes all you ever had was your body and your SOUL. @!@!@
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 4:04 PM UTC
Have you ever felt your mind leave your body?
@!@!@ When you feel your mind Leave your body All you have left is your soul. @!@!@ 11 years of schooling went from me Along with puberty, those spotty years And all the young women I loved during those tears. @!@!@ And yes all you ever had was your body and your SOUL. @!@!@
I would love to see this maybe made in to a song where others make up more in there own words just an idear thanks and regards Paul  >$-)
paul-hardwick
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 4:04 PM UTC
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