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I found a note of long ago promises Made of words like smoke floating into nothing Yea! it was foolishness but my eyes were blinded I thought of it as sweet as chocolate But its sweetness is temporary bitterness of pain remains with that of our long ago promises. With maturity, I come to realize never build love with words of fairytales, fantasies & make believe, never build love with words of promises that were never made to come true... rather, build love with words of willingness to wait for the rightest time
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Oct 28, 2013
Oct 28, 2013 at 11:56 PM UTC
Building Love
I found a note of long ago promises Made of words like smoke floating into nothing Yea! it was foolishness but my eyes were blinded I thought of it as sweet as chocolate But its sweetness is temporary bitterness of pain remains with that of our long ago promises. With maturity, I come to realize never build love with words of fairytales, fantasies & make believe, never build love with words of promises that were never made to come true... rather, build love with words of willingness to wait for the rightest time
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Oct 28, 2013
Oct 28, 2013 at 11:56 PM UTC
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