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I play my electric guitar on my amp, Then there's a drum sampler, And I sing & scream okay, But without the bassist, I feel like I go commando. Fellows commented long ago, "Without the bass guitar, Your song feels hollow." I looked for any bassist, Here & there but to no avail. What I ultimately found out, Many play the Axe, But none a bass, Nobody plays it, not the bass, And my best songs sound hollow.
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Nov 22, 2024
Nov 22, 2024 at 11:29 AM UTC
I Go Commando
I play my electric guitar on my amp, Then there's a drum sampler, And I sing & scream okay, But without the bassist, I feel like I go commando. Fellows commented long ago, "Without the bass guitar, Your song feels hollow." I looked for any bassist, Here & there but to no avail. What I ultimately found out, Many play the Axe, But none a bass, Nobody plays it, not the bass, And my best songs sound hollow.
Atul
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35/M/Indian
Nov 22, 2024
Nov 22, 2024 at 11:29 AM UTC
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