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I’m searching for Paradise Beyond the vast ocean on a beach filled with white sand Under the palm tree in the shadows of untamed land Where the ocean tides pave over the imprints of a desolate shore And the wind echoes around caressing the sun drenched floor In front of the sea, sparkling from the sun’s radiant light Waiting to set, and be engulfed by the night In my hand I clasp upon a cold and crisp, refreshing beer Looking upon the horizon so clear Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise On an immeasurable plane of green land tangent only to a white mountain range Where the prairie has been spared from the time of industrial change In front of the sun as it strokes the horizon line I sit, while I clasp upon my tall glass of wine The sky is painted by an array of colors, reflecting off tranquil clouds Free from the hustle and bustle of crowds The grass is soft, like long bristles of velvet fur As the pollen rises from the flowers, it creates an indescribable blur Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise In the big city, illuminated by artificial light Surrounded by friends in the chaos of night We trek, pushing through the people infested street And pulse to the music of an inescapable beat In the heat of passion, impossible to explain We pop bottle after bottle of the most exclusive champagne Under the stars, beneath the glittering sky Indulging within the penthouse so high. Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise On the edge of the world, perched upon a soaring cliff Where you can taste the cool crisp air with but only a whiff As the sun begins to peak out from beneath the earths womb I pour a drink, full of spirits to consume The birds begin to sing in metronomic rhyme I sing along, to count the time In the twilight hour sets The new day begins as I’m purged of regrets Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise After an extensive and exhausting day of work Grueling and toiling for a boss who’s a **** Breaking my back for the lowest of scraps Sweating and Striving till my knees collapse I return to an undersized and meager house To be greeted by my enduring spouse Embracing the responsibility of my new role as a father I look upon the face of my daughter And within her eyes so nice I finally find Paradise
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 4:27 PM UTC
Searching For Paradise
I’m searching for Paradise Beyond the vast ocean on a beach filled with white sand Under the palm tree in the shadows of untamed land Where the ocean tides pave over the imprints of a desolate shore And the wind echoes around caressing the sun drenched floor In front of the sea, sparkling from the sun’s radiant light Waiting to set, and be engulfed by the night In my hand I clasp upon a cold and crisp, refreshing beer Looking upon the horizon so clear Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise On an immeasurable plane of green land tangent only to a white mountain range Where the prairie has been spared from the time of industrial change In front of the sun as it strokes the horizon line I sit, while I clasp upon my tall glass of wine The sky is painted by an array of colors, reflecting off tranquil clouds Free from the hustle and bustle of crowds The grass is soft, like long bristles of velvet fur As the pollen rises from the flowers, it creates an indescribable blur Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise In the big city, illuminated by artificial light Surrounded by friends in the chaos of night We trek, pushing through the people infested street And pulse to the music of an inescapable beat In the heat of passion, impossible to explain We pop bottle after bottle of the most exclusive champagne Under the stars, beneath the glittering sky Indulging within the penthouse so high. Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise On the edge of the world, perched upon a soaring cliff Where you can taste the cool crisp air with but only a whiff As the sun begins to peak out from beneath the earths womb I pour a drink, full of spirits to consume The birds begin to sing in metronomic rhyme I sing along, to count the time In the twilight hour sets The new day begins as I’m purged of regrets Oh, wouldn’t it be so nice To escape this place to Paradise I’m searching for Paradise After an extensive and exhausting day of work Grueling and toiling for a boss who’s a **** Breaking my back for the lowest of scraps Sweating and Striving till my knees collapse I return to an undersized and meager house To be greeted by my enduring spouse Embracing the responsibility of my new role as a father I look upon the face of my daughter And within her eyes so nice I finally find Paradise
At first read you may notice that these stanzas are representatives of stereotype paradise, but it is actually places the protagonist wanted to leave to escape to his family. the hidden gems represent the 4 different elements (water, earth,fire, air) also the 4 points of the day (day,sunset,night,sunrise) and 4 different alcohol (beer,wine,champagne, Spirit[liqour]) all these are illusions of paradise and only after experiencing all 4 elements he finds love in the 5th stanza no more counting moments in the day, he has life and no alcohol
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 4:27 PM UTC
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