Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
You've got the right image, but you've got the wrong form. I never said I wanted perfect, wasn't lookin' for the norm. The pictures didn't have to match. I wouldn't mind a subtle clash. But if you want it casual, then dude, I will be factual... This lady's got a heart to give. Free for all ain't how I live. Not that there's much wrong with that, I'm just not down to ride a train on an unclear track. But I'll quit the stubborn efforts now, and wipe the sweat off from my brow. 'Cause while I'll hate to, I'll admit that you, sir, you're just not it.
0
May 18, 2012
May 18, 2012 at 2:40 AM UTC
Imagery & Train Tracks
You've got the right image, but you've got the wrong form. I never said I wanted perfect, wasn't lookin' for the norm. The pictures didn't have to match. I wouldn't mind a subtle clash. But if you want it casual, then dude, I will be factual... This lady's got a heart to give. Free for all ain't how I live. Not that there's much wrong with that, I'm just not down to ride a train on an unclear track. But I'll quit the stubborn efforts now, and wipe the sweat off from my brow. 'Cause while I'll hate to, I'll admit that you, sir, you're just not it.
First draft written February 12, 2012. Work in progress.
danigreaves
Written by
American
May 18, 2012
May 18, 2012 at 2:40 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem