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Time came unbound like your feather wild hair, the feeling shadows of thorn, endtimes laid on the plate of a destitute breast. It was hell dark in the filthy theatre. The old ticket-girl sat **** and tattoed, like Madame Defarge knitting the playlist for the guillotine ball. And so clicked the tale from her needles to mine; how He spoke to the girl in the bathtub forsaken, razor-naked and numb: 'You die before living--' said the Dark Prince, 'a sad backwards thing; spread for me--learn.' He brought her on velvet the delight-box of tortures, the ambrosia of Tantalus to put between her legs. He artfully taught her to rub out the human for the animal clench, to **** all the sweetness, climb hard for the falling, then took it away from the mad thing a-mumble in her wilderness skull, wearing the blind face of an ancient race we can no longer know. He left laughing laughing on His way through the endtimes, for the Fall was forgotten and Death held no ease. ©joyannjones February 2013
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Aug 19, 2025
Aug 19, 2025 at 10:03 AM UTC
The Devil In Miss Jones
Time came unbound like your feather wild hair, the feeling shadows of thorn, endtimes laid on the plate of a destitute breast. It was hell dark in the filthy theatre. The old ticket-girl sat **** and tattoed, like Madame Defarge knitting the playlist for the guillotine ball. And so clicked the tale from her needles to mine; how He spoke to the girl in the bathtub forsaken, razor-naked and numb: 'You die before living--' said the Dark Prince, 'a sad backwards thing; spread for me--learn.' He brought her on velvet the delight-box of tortures, the ambrosia of Tantalus to put between her legs. He artfully taught her to rub out the human for the animal clench, to **** all the sweetness, climb hard for the falling, then took it away from the mad thing a-mumble in her wilderness skull, wearing the blind face of an ancient race we can no longer know. He left laughing laughing on His way through the endtimes, for the Fall was forgotten and Death held no ease. ©joyannjones February 2013
This is a reaction to a 1973 blue film I once was reluctantly dragged to called The Devil in Miss Jones, a review in a poem.
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Aug 19, 2025
Aug 19, 2025 at 10:03 AM UTC
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