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My mind is burning like the July... But the heart wants to cry.... I have left with no pride... And don't want to give one more try..... She is nonsense, ******* and rude.... Wants to see my happiness getting ******* I am pure and never went on that road All she tried to destroy my inner core... I wish...she holds me when i die Make me awake with her fake eye.. Share her guilt, thought and fears.. trying to erase all with artificial tears... i wanted to love you ..God swear.. But i will hate you ever ever and forever...
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Feb 12, 2021
Feb 12, 2021 at 10:08 PM UTC
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My mind is burning like the July... But the heart wants to cry.... I have left with no pride... And don't want to give one more try..... She is nonsense, ******* and rude.... Wants to see my happiness getting ******* I am pure and never went on that road All she tried to destroy my inner core... I wish...she holds me when i die Make me awake with her fake eye.. Share her guilt, thought and fears.. trying to erase all with artificial tears... i wanted to love you ..God swear.. But i will hate you ever ever and forever...
It's my first poem. In this poem, a boy makes allegation on her girlfriend who have cheated him. This is part 1. Girl will also reply to him in next part. Criticism would help me to perform better next time. Suggestions r most welcome.
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Feb 12, 2021
Feb 12, 2021 at 10:08 PM UTC
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