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A poem I admire looks me at my face like that bold girl I fell in love with and ask questions others won't dare ask-- on existence, life in our times and planet, sides I've taken on issues that concern all of  us. A gripping poem,  keeps on reminding me on puzzles and problems, that plague us from all four sides. This poem chides me for the  matters I keep hidden, as I am, not ready to face it; drive out  my fears from their hiding places, and tell them to behave. A poem I realize is power packed in the center of each word and image, metaphors that be, rather  than speak aloud, love reduced to equations of words and silences nesting in between. A poem transfuses in to one's blood stream and turns the heart a flower of sweet scents, ready to bloom in any season. This poem vanishes in to my cells becoming  a sun , my source of pleasure, a creative force. In my dreams poetry is a comely maiden dancing rapturously on the shores of time, elevating mind to the heights of ecstasy.    O
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Dec 17, 2011
Dec 17, 2011 at 12:35 PM UTC
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A poem I admire looks me at my face like that bold girl I fell in love with and ask questions others won't dare ask-- on existence, life in our times and planet, sides I've taken on issues that concern all of  us. A gripping poem,  keeps on reminding me on puzzles and problems, that plague us from all four sides. This poem chides me for the  matters I keep hidden, as I am, not ready to face it; drive out  my fears from their hiding places, and tell them to behave. A poem I realize is power packed in the center of each word and image, metaphors that be, rather  than speak aloud, love reduced to equations of words and silences nesting in between. A poem transfuses in to one's blood stream and turns the heart a flower of sweet scents, ready to bloom in any season. This poem vanishes in to my cells becoming  a sun , my source of pleasure, a creative force. In my dreams poetry is a comely maiden dancing rapturously on the shores of time, elevating mind to the heights of ecstasy.    O
k-balachandran
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Dec 17, 2011
Dec 17, 2011 at 12:35 PM UTC
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