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Two people are kissing on the bus, their lips entwined like one knot of candyfloss. Nobody else notices this, or does but doesn’t care, eyes peering gloomily out the windows at the belly of fog across empty fields. I wonder how long these two have lasted, how long they have brushed tongues and laced fingers with each other. Barely eighteen, adolescence prickling their skins like heat rash, the fear of young adulthood a neon light down a dark alleyway. I wonder if they will last. I doubt it, but there is no way of telling. I ought to say it’s fleeting, that in half a decade you might not know each other, two people together once in some way but now not, or with others who have yet to enter the frame. But it would be rude to interrupt. They kiss, I sit.
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Nov 15, 2017
Nov 15, 2017 at 1:38 PM UTC
Kissing
Two people are kissing on the bus, their lips entwined like one knot of candyfloss. Nobody else notices this, or does but doesn’t care, eyes peering gloomily out the windows at the belly of fog across empty fields. I wonder how long these two have lasted, how long they have brushed tongues and laced fingers with each other. Barely eighteen, adolescence prickling their skins like heat rash, the fear of young adulthood a neon light down a dark alleyway. I wonder if they will last. I doubt it, but there is no way of telling. I ought to say it’s fleeting, that in half a decade you might not know each other, two people together once in some way but now not, or with others who have yet to enter the frame. But it would be rude to interrupt. They kiss, I sit.
Written: November 2017. Explanation: A poem written in my own time. Feedback welcome. A link to my Facebook writing page can be found on my HP home page. NOTE: Many of my older pieces will be removed from HP at some point in the future.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Nov 15, 2017
Nov 15, 2017 at 1:38 PM UTC
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