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Silence can be so loud, And that’s what drives you mad. The fact that I don’t care anymore, And you lost something you never even had. Now the pedal’s to the floor, Driving all through town. Yelling you can’t take it anymore, You’re becoming lost and I’m nowhere to be found. You begin to panic, And wonder what went wrong. This is how I’ve changed. Loving you has made me strong. Speedometer begins to climb, You ask and ask. But I’ve disappeared forever, Gone like whiskey in your flask. You buy another bottle and you drink it down, While your speedometer continues to soar. You speed around this ghost town, Eyes grow damp and tears begin to pour. Your vision begins to blur, So blurry you can’t see. Inside, this feeling is familiar. I remember, every time you laid your fist against me.
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Nov 2, 2011
Nov 2, 2011 at 6:21 PM UTC
Silence Can Be So Loud
Silence can be so loud, And that’s what drives you mad. The fact that I don’t care anymore, And you lost something you never even had. Now the pedal’s to the floor, Driving all through town. Yelling you can’t take it anymore, You’re becoming lost and I’m nowhere to be found. You begin to panic, And wonder what went wrong. This is how I’ve changed. Loving you has made me strong. Speedometer begins to climb, You ask and ask. But I’ve disappeared forever, Gone like whiskey in your flask. You buy another bottle and you drink it down, While your speedometer continues to soar. You speed around this ghost town, Eyes grow damp and tears begin to pour. Your vision begins to blur, So blurry you can’t see. Inside, this feeling is familiar. I remember, every time you laid your fist against me.
I'm not sure if I want to finish this one, or leave it how it is. Comments? Suggestions?
courtney-snodgrass
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Nov 2, 2011
Nov 2, 2011 at 6:21 PM UTC
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