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Sucre I failed you For I did not learn to speak My teacher did not agree with me So I did not last the week Sucre you failed me Bundled with a ***** because of gender Her company a test of patience So I escaped with the boys on a ****** But Sucre where we did not fail Was the comfort that I could live in A homely hostel with space more than most Bar far the best place I’ve been And so Sucre you succeeded I got plenty well needed sleep Lived a week of homelike activity Regenerating energy whilst enjoying your pretty peace Sucre where you excelled yourself Was the endless extra sights to be seen Many museums of my interest, devil hunting in the convent And evidence of where dinosaurs have been So Sucre overall If I were to give you a grade Considering fault beyond your control I’d say you deserve an A!
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Feb 23, 2014
Feb 23, 2014 at 12:26 PM UTC
Successes and Failures of Sucre
Sucre I failed you For I did not learn to speak My teacher did not agree with me So I did not last the week Sucre you failed me Bundled with a ***** because of gender Her company a test of patience So I escaped with the boys on a ****** But Sucre where we did not fail Was the comfort that I could live in A homely hostel with space more than most Bar far the best place I’ve been And so Sucre you succeeded I got plenty well needed sleep Lived a week of homelike activity Regenerating energy whilst enjoying your pretty peace Sucre where you excelled yourself Was the endless extra sights to be seen Many museums of my interest, devil hunting in the convent And evidence of where dinosaurs have been So Sucre overall If I were to give you a grade Considering fault beyond your control I’d say you deserve an A!
Sucre, Bolivia. 10th October 2013
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Feb 23, 2014
Feb 23, 2014 at 12:26 PM UTC
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