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Filthy with an itching stink on the dog day subways of choking humidity every pour on my body screams but there is a comfortability in the commiserating faces of greasy passersby we all deal with the heat without warning the smell of a sulfur **** fills my nostrils to the brim and i hear somebody cough this is the beauty of language a glance upward yields an advertisement with enlarged breasts—deals on plastic surgery—the women bellow it eats a McDonald’s breakfast sandwich with coffee it is my choice what to put on this page my choice the words and images my choice the moods and emotions for there are, in fact, six people on this train with their noses in books the one next to me is Game of Thrones and the girl across uses the most advanced handheld piece of technology in history as a makeup mirror Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah High art for Mel Bochner an ad campaign for the HTC One and representative nonsense for everyone else as I sweat my headphone chord makes me acutely aware of a lump under my ear as a homeless man sleeps without shoes on the bench opposite is that a juxtaposition of images I see there? or did i just make that up for dramatic affect? that is your choice my friend Just as it is mine to use that patronizing tone to create an air of highfalutin significance despite the fact that I am just another dumb privileged straight white guy. I feel like i should apologize..... I just missed my stop I do that fairly often
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Jun 19, 2014
Jun 19, 2014 at 11:55 AM UTC
On The Train Again (2)
Filthy with an itching stink on the dog day subways of choking humidity every pour on my body screams but there is a comfortability in the commiserating faces of greasy passersby we all deal with the heat without warning the smell of a sulfur **** fills my nostrils to the brim and i hear somebody cough this is the beauty of language a glance upward yields an advertisement with enlarged breasts—deals on plastic surgery—the women bellow it eats a McDonald’s breakfast sandwich with coffee it is my choice what to put on this page my choice the words and images my choice the moods and emotions for there are, in fact, six people on this train with their noses in books the one next to me is Game of Thrones and the girl across uses the most advanced handheld piece of technology in history as a makeup mirror Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah High art for Mel Bochner an ad campaign for the HTC One and representative nonsense for everyone else as I sweat my headphone chord makes me acutely aware of a lump under my ear as a homeless man sleeps without shoes on the bench opposite is that a juxtaposition of images I see there? or did i just make that up for dramatic affect? that is your choice my friend Just as it is mine to use that patronizing tone to create an air of highfalutin significance despite the fact that I am just another dumb privileged straight white guy. I feel like i should apologize..... I just missed my stop I do that fairly often
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Jun 19, 2014
Jun 19, 2014 at 11:55 AM UTC
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