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In the fog of war Decisions are made in haste In the dew of night Misinformation prevails In the heat of noon Soldiers await their orders In the day’s tumult Dead bodies drape the landscape In the daze of war Mistakes are often concealed After the war’s fog May the truth be ascertained In the dew of peace
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Mar 12, 2014
Mar 12, 2014 at 1:40 PM UTC
“I Take Responsibility” *
In the fog of war Decisions are made in haste In the dew of night Misinformation prevails In the heat of noon Soldiers await their orders In the day’s tumult Dead bodies drape the landscape In the daze of war Mistakes are often concealed After the war’s fog May the truth be ascertained In the dew of peace
* Hilary Clinton, Secretary of State Hillary Clinton commented on the deadly assault on a U.S. diplomatic mission in Libya, saying she's responsible for the security of American diplomatic outposts. She used the term "in the fog of war" in her comments. Hilary's comment prompted the poem which I present here. Comments are appreciated both pro or con. The poem was originally written as sets of haiku. I changed these to alternating lines of 5 and 7 syllabi, a form that as far as I know does not exist.
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Mar 12, 2014
Mar 12, 2014 at 1:40 PM UTC
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