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If you pay the price, you may reap what hides there’s a secret garden nobody knows. You go driving ’round, look in, but never enter. If you’ve got a hammer and a vase, you can take what’s hers. She’ll lead you down the path that you never let one in yourself. Hopes of being heard he never truly will. In her words, his mind, forever at risk, yet still yearns. There’s everything you want, everything you need. His second nature: restraint always is, and ever will be. If you don’t take her hand, what else have you got? But those daisy chains of empty thoughts it’s all slipped away. And time sits upon him on her bench, his mind wanders, with the stars as they trail along, behind another, like a queue of his thoughts, and once again, blocked, from what is his a chance lost in the haze, as he watches her walk away. And there he stands, still- in her secret garden. Which once was, what he could have been
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Jun 9, 2025
Jun 9, 2025 at 12:33 PM UTC
Secret Garden
If you pay the price, you may reap what hides there’s a secret garden nobody knows. You go driving ’round, look in, but never enter. If you’ve got a hammer and a vase, you can take what’s hers. She’ll lead you down the path that you never let one in yourself. Hopes of being heard he never truly will. In her words, his mind, forever at risk, yet still yearns. There’s everything you want, everything you need. His second nature: restraint always is, and ever will be. If you don’t take her hand, what else have you got? But those daisy chains of empty thoughts it’s all slipped away. And time sits upon him on her bench, his mind wanders, with the stars as they trail along, behind another, like a queue of his thoughts, and once again, blocked, from what is his a chance lost in the haze, as he watches her walk away. And there he stands, still- in her secret garden. Which once was, what he could have been
This is inspired by the song 'Secret Garden' by Bruce Sprinsteen, I built off a few lines from the song
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Jun 9, 2025
Jun 9, 2025 at 12:33 PM UTC
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