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He heard a last echoed clink of liquor-laden ice-cubes, Stuck between two stools that screamed for company, I gazed across his vacant stare to the barman –the silent DJ, Professionally ignorant as I gestured my hoarse thirst, I waited a little minute, another minute an’ just one more, Enter our businessman, full-schedule, long-hauled to drink, With a rib-eye steak of a face an’ breath surely barbecued, Two satisfied cheeks, pink-puffed with brows fit for burial, Teeth ground with tension but brighter than the lighting A fungal-lung nose perched upon a smile that I could smell, He plumbed himself wet-shave close to my stiffened neck, “..Hana Drink..?” (Silence) best to follow the DJ’s example, (Bullish huffs) (Lips licked) “.. Ya’ll wantin’ a drink, Mister?..” Flustered by the company, I replied “..Non, Je think eh Je chi..” A retort of sorts, faux languages not my degree, “..Leaba..Bed!” Spluttered just at the end – an insulting first impression, He seemed nervously joyous, loosened from being himself, Yet his trouser belt buckled, pulled tight to conversation level, An’ Redwood-trunk hands, alive with the latest deal struck, “..Bedtime for us..” he bare-bawled, splitting my weary eyes, His numbed arm clumsily flung around me, “..bedtime for us!..”, DJ unmuted, the music paused, I mouthed softly “..just the bill..” (Silence) “..Who’s Bill?.. a friend?…Is he cute?.. So this drink?” I panic still.
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Dec 30, 2013
Dec 30, 2013 at 11:15 AM UTC
The Late Night Misunderstanding with the businessman in Bavaria
He heard a last echoed clink of liquor-laden ice-cubes, Stuck between two stools that screamed for company, I gazed across his vacant stare to the barman –the silent DJ, Professionally ignorant as I gestured my hoarse thirst, I waited a little minute, another minute an’ just one more, Enter our businessman, full-schedule, long-hauled to drink, With a rib-eye steak of a face an’ breath surely barbecued, Two satisfied cheeks, pink-puffed with brows fit for burial, Teeth ground with tension but brighter than the lighting A fungal-lung nose perched upon a smile that I could smell, He plumbed himself wet-shave close to my stiffened neck, “..Hana Drink..?” (Silence) best to follow the DJ’s example, (Bullish huffs) (Lips licked) “.. Ya’ll wantin’ a drink, Mister?..” Flustered by the company, I replied “..Non, Je think eh Je chi..” A retort of sorts, faux languages not my degree, “..Leaba..Bed!” Spluttered just at the end – an insulting first impression, He seemed nervously joyous, loosened from being himself, Yet his trouser belt buckled, pulled tight to conversation level, An’ Redwood-trunk hands, alive with the latest deal struck, “..Bedtime for us..” he bare-bawled, splitting my weary eyes, His numbed arm clumsily flung around me, “..bedtime for us!..”, DJ unmuted, the music paused, I mouthed softly “..just the bill..” (Silence) “..Who’s Bill?.. a friend?…Is he cute?.. So this drink?” I panic still.
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Dec 30, 2013
Dec 30, 2013 at 11:15 AM UTC
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