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Deep Sea Diving

if you find one happiness

like the barrel on your head

loaded with a pocket of air for you to breathe

 

then you know that if you sink

to atmospheric tides

you must find fresher barrels

when the novelty declines

and the oxygen gives way

to the oceanic brine

 

for the last moments of time

you’re chin-up on a water bed

the water cradles your esophagus

and then you find you surely must

find some fresher air to breathe

 

but to search is to be dissatisfied

to question once is to imply

that everything can be replied

with answers and with truth

 

that bucket on your head

running out of salty air

to stay is to slip into death

like listening to the ocean in a seashell

till slow blood flows in too few waves

 

but could you not also swim?

abandon the comfortable end

for the off chance that some underwater shelter

will serve you shots of oxygen?

 

the funny thing you find

when you let dying pleasure go

and you’re suspended, all alone

the gas trapped beneath

was too stale for you to breathe

but enough to buoy the unburdened barrel

into swiftly surfacing

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sean-carnegie-golightly
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Dec 13, 2011
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