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Can you tell me How it feels to be disconnected? Was it string by string Or did you rip it off all at once? When you looked at me Did you see the color in my eyes? Or did you see black and white Before you looked away? Was it hard? Hesitation, doubts, guesses Or was it easy? Simple, quick, effortless When we touched Did you feel that electricity? Or did your hand Only felt an object? As I loved you Did you love me? Or did you just Say it awkwardly? When I thought of you Did you think of me? Or were your thoughts randomized With everything but me? I asked how it felt Because I am still connected To someone who is gone Who pulled away so effortlessly A red string of fate Severed by you And I asked myself How can I do the same?
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Jul 3, 2025
Jul 3, 2025 at 9:37 AM UTC
Disconnected Love
Can you tell me How it feels to be disconnected? Was it string by string Or did you rip it off all at once? When you looked at me Did you see the color in my eyes? Or did you see black and white Before you looked away? Was it hard? Hesitation, doubts, guesses Or was it easy? Simple, quick, effortless When we touched Did you feel that electricity? Or did your hand Only felt an object? As I loved you Did you love me? Or did you just Say it awkwardly? When I thought of you Did you think of me? Or were your thoughts randomized With everything but me? I asked how it felt Because I am still connected To someone who is gone Who pulled away so effortlessly A red string of fate Severed by you And I asked myself How can I do the same?
LanceRemir
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33/M/United States
Jul 3, 2025
Jul 3, 2025 at 9:37 AM UTC
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