the whisper of failure hangs in the sky
her frantically beating chest pounds her breast achingly erratic & raw
they urge the girl on
but life crashed & crushes as she screams her head barely above water
woman why should you feel this way they ask
this is your dream
a cry echoes through the cold languid air
Feb 23, 2013
Feb 23, 2013 at 10:49 PM UTC
the whisper of failure hangs in the sky
her frantically beating chest pounds her breast achingly erratic & raw
they urge the girl on
but life crashed & crushes as she screams her head barely above water
woman why should you feel this way they ask
this is your dream
a cry echoes through the cold languid air
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