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no not mine, was invited by the older son, seemed almost routine, the rest, brother, mother and father let me fit in, in between!!! They had there ups and downs, they got through it, with each other! I watched and saw them, be there , let no-one fall, be for one another! Then the oldest made a decision to depart, take himself far away He took his life and the home became a house and there was no play! In the four years and four months I see some difference, always pain but the base of it,strong, still stands with cracks and some strain!!!!!!! now the youngest has a career, a girl, a new life growing, a home maybe some hope and he knows that the foundation his parents give will be there for him, help him cope!!!!!!!
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Oct 21, 2015
Oct 21, 2015 at 5:22 PM UTC
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no not mine, was invited by the older son, seemed almost routine, the rest, brother, mother and father let me fit in, in between!!! They had there ups and downs, they got through it, with each other! I watched and saw them, be there , let no-one fall, be for one another! Then the oldest made a decision to depart, take himself far away He took his life and the home became a house and there was no play! In the four years and four months I see some difference, always pain but the base of it,strong, still stands with cracks and some strain!!!!!!! now the youngest has a career, a girl, a new life growing, a home maybe some hope and he knows that the foundation his parents give will be there for him, help him cope!!!!!!!
to my adopted family, love!!! to sven and laura and your new life, there are no words to wish you all that wish you. XXXXXX
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Oct 21, 2015
Oct 21, 2015 at 5:22 PM UTC
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