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Have you witnessed  something but Couldn't remember yet you can potray even minute Details of that incident , I had My 4yrs old eyes had witnessed that She was burning right beside me And I was busy wondering about the The the design my castle should have It went on , I succeeded my castles did Even the heat from her pyre did it's job Fulfilled what her child wished My father poured the water from the river Onto the settling pyre , as everyone with a bamboo threw the Burned remains into the river , may the the creatures Below this water satisfy their hunger , the priest chanted While i kept jumping in the shallow blue waters I was given a new name "Shankara". As I'd came home On my dad's shoulders completely covered in the ash As I had spent hours trying to build the castle with that as well Everyone's eyes were numb , my father's weren't Probably his heart would have been
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 3:42 AM UTC
And I never saw her again
Have you witnessed  something but Couldn't remember yet you can potray even minute Details of that incident , I had My 4yrs old eyes had witnessed that She was burning right beside me And I was busy wondering about the The the design my castle should have It went on , I succeeded my castles did Even the heat from her pyre did it's job Fulfilled what her child wished My father poured the water from the river Onto the settling pyre , as everyone with a bamboo threw the Burned remains into the river , may the the creatures Below this water satisfy their hunger , the priest chanted While i kept jumping in the shallow blue waters I was given a new name "Shankara". As I'd came home On my dad's shoulders completely covered in the ash As I had spent hours trying to build the castle with that as well Everyone's eyes were numb , my father's weren't Probably his heart would have been
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 3:42 AM UTC
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