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Trying to hold fond, forever memories, I painted the sun setting in the hills With a river running down, and cottonwoods And elms standing in thick shade, waiting, Forever imprisoned in the oils. There were rich red-golds and blackish greens And blue-gray dusk was over all, and yet, My painting so carefully brushed was not The sunset I tried so hard to hold A moment longer on the cloth. I missed or could not capture Birds in sleepy twitters calling, Slow curling camp fires scents, And the red-gold glinting sun on your hair. Pictures are not like being there.
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Mar 11
Mar 11, 2026 at 10:56 AM UTC
Explication of a Painting
Trying to hold fond, forever memories, I painted the sun setting in the hills With a river running down, and cottonwoods And elms standing in thick shade, waiting, Forever imprisoned in the oils. There were rich red-golds and blackish greens And blue-gray dusk was over all, and yet, My painting so carefully brushed was not The sunset I tried so hard to hold A moment longer on the cloth. I missed or could not capture Birds in sleepy twitters calling, Slow curling camp fires scents, And the red-gold glinting sun on your hair. Pictures are not like being there.
The poem explains the painting; Art walks hand in hand with art; One form is lost without the others; Artists are all sisters and brothers.
don-bouchard
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Mar 11
Mar 11, 2026 at 10:56 AM UTC
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