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At the back of the brick bomb shelter out of window view on Saturday morning before the matinée Fay pulled up the hem of her yellow dress to show Baruch the bruises and red marks her father had made and all because she didn't know the Credo in Latin all the way through Baruch stared quickly then she let down the hem and said don't tell no one else I'll be for it I won't say a word he said what the heck is the Credo? she looked at him frowning you don't know? no idea he said it's the I Believe prayer and we Catholics are supposed to know it all through but my father wanted me to know it all in Latin but I couldn't get it all and he got mad and punished me she said I believe what? he asked I believe in God the Father and so on she said I'm Jewish Baruch said we have our own prayers not that I can recall any of them I do she said but Latin is hard and the nuns say it all the time in their prayers and one nun hit me with a ruler for mistakes and said I was lazy Baruch shrugged his shoulders glad I aren't Catholic then he said now what about the cinema matinée? you coming? my father said I was to stay in all weekend and practice but my mother said go and enjoy so you are coming? he asked Fay nodded yes guess I will what about your old man? he's away for the day in Liverpool and Mum said she'd cover for me good for her he said she pulled her dress tidy and he pushed his fingers through his dark brown hair and they climbed over the metal fence surrounding the grass and bomb shelter and walked under the railway bridge and up the narrow road behind the cinema Baruch in his jeans and red cowboy shirt his silver looking six shooter tucked in his belt walking beside her looking out for bad guy or Injuns making sure none scalped him or her with their tomahawks riding their invisible horses across the bomb site but none came so he could relax knowing she and he would be all right.
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Oct 4, 2013
Oct 4, 2013 at 7:41 AM UTC
BARUCH AND FAY AND ALL OK.
At the back of the brick bomb shelter out of window view on Saturday morning before the matinée Fay pulled up the hem of her yellow dress to show Baruch the bruises and red marks her father had made and all because she didn't know the Credo in Latin all the way through Baruch stared quickly then she let down the hem and said don't tell no one else I'll be for it I won't say a word he said what the heck is the Credo? she looked at him frowning you don't know? no idea he said it's the I Believe prayer and we Catholics are supposed to know it all through but my father wanted me to know it all in Latin but I couldn't get it all and he got mad and punished me she said I believe what? he asked I believe in God the Father and so on she said I'm Jewish Baruch said we have our own prayers not that I can recall any of them I do she said but Latin is hard and the nuns say it all the time in their prayers and one nun hit me with a ruler for mistakes and said I was lazy Baruch shrugged his shoulders glad I aren't Catholic then he said now what about the cinema matinée? you coming? my father said I was to stay in all weekend and practice but my mother said go and enjoy so you are coming? he asked Fay nodded yes guess I will what about your old man? he's away for the day in Liverpool and Mum said she'd cover for me good for her he said she pulled her dress tidy and he pushed his fingers through his dark brown hair and they climbed over the metal fence surrounding the grass and bomb shelter and walked under the railway bridge and up the narrow road behind the cinema Baruch in his jeans and red cowboy shirt his silver looking six shooter tucked in his belt walking beside her looking out for bad guy or Injuns making sure none scalped him or her with their tomahawks riding their invisible horses across the bomb site but none came so he could relax knowing she and he would be all right.
SET IN LONDON IN 1950S.
terry-collett
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Oct 4, 2013
Oct 4, 2013 at 7:41 AM UTC
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