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All on a sudden

Age crept up on him in stealth,

careful not to tread upon a dry twig

in the garden of his memories,

careful not to disturb

the butterflies, the bees,

the tiny hummingbirds and koels,

which, drunk on nectars,

in happy abandon,

sang their songs all day long.

 

His ears, once, were keen,

picking up every note, every tone

every trill, however shrill.

and he swayed to the music

and sashayed on occasion

as he walked through his garden

humming their songs

and caressing those flowers.

 

And now that the tumult of youth

had left subdued

and speed gave way to grace,

he could now detect

that his breathing was louder

than all that music,

that he heard it above all else

like a loud metronome

which only he could hear.

 

He'd now lie awake often,

listening to the night rain

come roaring down in fury

and leaving soon after

and then the raindrops from the roof

drumming merrily upon the puddles

and he'd also listen, above it all,

to the sound of his own breath

beating a slow rhythm.

 

Then, just like that,

came a day when,

all on a sudden,

the sun froze in mid air.

and so too, the butterflies

and the hummingbirds.

the flowers wilted and drooped

and silence fell upon the garden

with a terrible crash.

and above that crescendo,

he heard his own rasping breath.

 

he heard nothing more.

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Written by
anilkumar-parat
61 / M / Indian
Published
Jul 15, 2021
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