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Aesthetically pleasing spiderwebs Dogs fitting perfectly into each dorway Books over Books over Books over Books being dead wood covered by dead wood inside of dead Wood surrounded by stone it´s what I call home Fleeing feeling of savety but still somehow comforting Hooks for our clothes and jackets (that can never move) Socks appearing and disapperaing suddenly and out of nowhere Magnetically linked toys
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Apr 25, 2018
Apr 25, 2018 at 3:56 PM UTC
still like air
Aesthetically pleasing spiderwebs Dogs fitting perfectly into each dorway Books over Books over Books over Books being dead wood covered by dead wood inside of dead Wood surrounded by stone it´s what I call home Fleeing feeling of savety but still somehow comforting Hooks for our clothes and jackets (that can never move) Socks appearing and disapperaing suddenly and out of nowhere Magnetically linked toys
So I thought of something more to accompany my poem "like still air" but since that one came to me out of nowhere I felt the second stanza (I'd consider the two middle verses as some sort of chorus or "room-divider") was too forced and that I'd prefer to post both versions, since I tried somthing different for this one. Maybe someone will notice? I'll probably have to work on the meter and number of syllables, but that's for another day
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Bigender
Apr 25, 2018
Apr 25, 2018 at 3:56 PM UTC
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