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i,d smelt that smell before ...death was at his door he didnt know it ..yet i could smell it death would have him soon he carried on as if nothing wrong yet i could smell so well death was waiting ,panting stinking death was at his door my nose did linger ,a smell so vile yet memories made me sad that smell so well... that i knew dealt a deathy blow.. it sent a shiver he looked quite well but soon would show the stench of ground below freinds would crowd a grief alound ..showing respect now due said good bye but did not cry as they melted away like snow
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Feb 16, 2011
Feb 16, 2011 at 9:42 PM UTC
that smell
i,d smelt that smell before ...death was at his door he didnt know it ..yet i could smell it death would have him soon he carried on as if nothing wrong yet i could smell so well death was waiting ,panting stinking death was at his door my nose did linger ,a smell so vile yet memories made me sad that smell so well... that i knew dealt a deathy blow.. it sent a shiver he looked quite well but soon would show the stench of ground below freinds would crowd a grief alound ..showing respect now due said good bye but did not cry as they melted away like snow
andy-fardell
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Feb 16, 2011
Feb 16, 2011 at 9:42 PM UTC
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