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The problem with being 18 is simple. The thing is we feel too much, too deeply, too suddenly. Our anger is an earth-splitting motion, Sadness a thousand and one rain clouds dragging down And happiness is the flight of the new born bird Love is the wonder of finding a buried Easter egg. Each day, anger strikes, sadness rains and, on good days, love rebuilds. We live on shorelines ravaged Daily and salvage fiercely.
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Jul 29, 2013
Jul 29, 2013 at 12:07 PM UTC
Mixed Metaphors: Eighteen
The problem with being 18 is simple. The thing is we feel too much, too deeply, too suddenly. Our anger is an earth-splitting motion, Sadness a thousand and one rain clouds dragging down And happiness is the flight of the new born bird Love is the wonder of finding a buried Easter egg. Each day, anger strikes, sadness rains and, on good days, love rebuilds. We live on shorelines ravaged Daily and salvage fiercely.
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Bangladeshi
Jul 29, 2013
Jul 29, 2013 at 12:07 PM UTC
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