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A girl has bright eyes, smooth thighs and a perky disguise. She's been shy and never made much of a try but no word of a lie she loved a man long before she was of age to die. A girl had long hair with tints of blue. She wore a dress a man couldn't nearly see through but a man needed no clue as to what lay under the zip he desired so badly to undo. A man was nothing special. He in no way had it all. Dark hair and he stood six feet tall but when it came to a girl he would repeatedly stall. Never sure what to say should he pluck up the courage and call. A girl knew she was under the view of a man. It wasn't entirely new but this strange sensation grew as if she just now felt it too. Not sure what to do when a man leaned in she withdrew. A girl began to cry upon the sight of his failed try. In the midst of confusion a solution arrived when she spied the edge of a knife and a vein which so diligently pumped her life. A man kissed a girl in a Christmas ball, drunk as high hell and stumbling though he didn't fall. She whispered "I love you too" only half way through removing her shoe when a man lifted her against the wall, too eager to merely watch the remainder of the clothing removal. A girl was surprised by a man's advance. She often scried a  future in which a knot had been tied. A man treated her as a precious doll, protecting her from the demon's who'd call. A girl enjoyed this time and began to find she could unwind, however, the knife and a vision of a man's advance kept clinging to her mind. Only a few weeks later a man lies with a girl. A girl begins to cry. A man apologises. A man and a girl remain together. A man loves a girl. A girl loves a man. And a girl is suicidally sad.
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Jun 8, 2014
Jun 8, 2014 at 8:30 PM UTC
The Rorshach test.
A girl has bright eyes, smooth thighs and a perky disguise. She's been shy and never made much of a try but no word of a lie she loved a man long before she was of age to die. A girl had long hair with tints of blue. She wore a dress a man couldn't nearly see through but a man needed no clue as to what lay under the zip he desired so badly to undo. A man was nothing special. He in no way had it all. Dark hair and he stood six feet tall but when it came to a girl he would repeatedly stall. Never sure what to say should he pluck up the courage and call. A girl knew she was under the view of a man. It wasn't entirely new but this strange sensation grew as if she just now felt it too. Not sure what to do when a man leaned in she withdrew. A girl began to cry upon the sight of his failed try. In the midst of confusion a solution arrived when she spied the edge of a knife and a vein which so diligently pumped her life. A man kissed a girl in a Christmas ball, drunk as high hell and stumbling though he didn't fall. She whispered "I love you too" only half way through removing her shoe when a man lifted her against the wall, too eager to merely watch the remainder of the clothing removal. A girl was surprised by a man's advance. She often scried a  future in which a knot had been tied. A man treated her as a precious doll, protecting her from the demon's who'd call. A girl enjoyed this time and began to find she could unwind, however, the knife and a vision of a man's advance kept clinging to her mind. Only a few weeks later a man lies with a girl. A girl begins to cry. A man apologises. A man and a girl remain together. A man loves a girl. A girl loves a man. And a girl is suicidally sad.
adam-burke
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Northern Irish
Jun 8, 2014
Jun 8, 2014 at 8:30 PM UTC
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