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listening to Nirvana's "Something in the Way" and i am -now- just realizing how ******* good this song is. i mean, the mood cuts right to the bone: *underneath the bridge tarp has sprung a leak and the animals I've trapped have all become my pets and I'm living off of grass and the drippings from the ceiiiilinggg it's ok to eat fish 'cause they don't have any feeeeeelingsssssss something in the way mmmmmmmm something in the way (yeah) mmmmmmmhmmm* it's jus kurt on the geetar alone till the chorus, doing a simple chord, and, thing is, he isn't so much singing as he is speaking in loose meter; and it's almost as if between the words he is saying, ".. well how the **** could song survive this thing i am talking about yuhknow? i am giving you my guts." you finally get some lilt and rhyme that might be considered song toward the end of the verse, but this is immediately undercut with, of all things, given what preceded it, a joke ---- it's okay to eat fish 'cause they don't have any feelings holyfuckingshitdoesthiscapturetheabsurdityofthings and i don't mean a joke as in hahafunny but rather what. else. can. i. do. but laugh, else i'll cry; and I can't cry anymore 'cause i'm all outta tears. why?? because this abyss called "existence" - that history, heh, tells us is imbued with rational purpose or intent, or whatever - bats its pretty little eyes at me like a big fuckyou.. i think kurt is, suggesting, here: laugh back. it's like Camus' Sisyphus: i dare you to roll that same rock called "life" up the same hill everyday all day and summon (somehow) a smile, ------ or at least a    s m  i      R    k and watch as beauty bolts through your dead fecund heart removing that thing in your way
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Jan 14, 2016
Jan 14, 2016 at 10:00 PM UTC
it's ok to eat fish, Sisyphus
listening to Nirvana's "Something in the Way" and i am -now- just realizing how ******* good this song is. i mean, the mood cuts right to the bone: *underneath the bridge tarp has sprung a leak and the animals I've trapped have all become my pets and I'm living off of grass and the drippings from the ceiiiilinggg it's ok to eat fish 'cause they don't have any feeeeeelingsssssss something in the way mmmmmmmm something in the way (yeah) mmmmmmmhmmm* it's jus kurt on the geetar alone till the chorus, doing a simple chord, and, thing is, he isn't so much singing as he is speaking in loose meter; and it's almost as if between the words he is saying, ".. well how the **** could song survive this thing i am talking about yuhknow? i am giving you my guts." you finally get some lilt and rhyme that might be considered song toward the end of the verse, but this is immediately undercut with, of all things, given what preceded it, a joke ---- it's okay to eat fish 'cause they don't have any feelings holyfuckingshitdoesthiscapturetheabsurdityofthings and i don't mean a joke as in hahafunny but rather what. else. can. i. do. but laugh, else i'll cry; and I can't cry anymore 'cause i'm all outta tears. why?? because this abyss called "existence" - that history, heh, tells us is imbued with rational purpose or intent, or whatever - bats its pretty little eyes at me like a big fuckyou.. i think kurt is, suggesting, here: laugh back. it's like Camus' Sisyphus: i dare you to roll that same rock called "life" up the same hill everyday all day and summon (somehow) a smile, ------ or at least a    s m  i      R    k and watch as beauty bolts through your dead fecund heart removing that thing in your way
dm micklow
mike-dm
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Jan 14, 2016
Jan 14, 2016 at 10:00 PM UTC
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