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Some days I feel I'm drowning sinking way down low. Some days I feel like giving up and think I'd like to go. But, looking up above me I see a gleaming light. I swim and kick and struggle and push with all my might. As I break upon the surface I gasp and gulp for air. I look all around me and can't believe what's there. Floating on the ocean as far as I can see lots of coloured lifejackets waiting just for me. As soon as I get near one they wrap themselves around and pull my weary body to some safer ground. 'Where do they come from? ' I think I hear you say. Well, they come from the people I talk to every day. People who understand this journey we are on. Whether it is short whether it is long. So, thank you my friends that's all I'd like to say. And, I hope I'll be a lifejacket for you someday!
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Jan 3, 2012
Jan 3, 2012 at 5:43 PM UTC
Friends
Some days I feel I'm drowning sinking way down low. Some days I feel like giving up and think I'd like to go. But, looking up above me I see a gleaming light. I swim and kick and struggle and push with all my might. As I break upon the surface I gasp and gulp for air. I look all around me and can't believe what's there. Floating on the ocean as far as I can see lots of coloured lifejackets waiting just for me. As soon as I get near one they wrap themselves around and pull my weary body to some safer ground. 'Where do they come from? ' I think I hear you say. Well, they come from the people I talk to every day. People who understand this journey we are on. Whether it is short whether it is long. So, thank you my friends that's all I'd like to say. And, I hope I'll be a lifejacket for you someday!
daniel-luke-nelson
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Jan 3, 2012
Jan 3, 2012 at 5:43 PM UTC
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