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Possible titles: happenstance storm colors Concrete chameleon Original: I watched the sidewalk Go from light to spotted grey Sudden rain shower. A different version: Watching the sidewalk grey spots growing together Stone chameleon.
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Mar 17, 2020
Mar 17, 2020 at 11:30 AM UTC
I can't decide which one I like best
Possible titles: happenstance storm colors Concrete chameleon Original: I watched the sidewalk Go from light to spotted grey Sudden rain shower. A different version: Watching the sidewalk grey spots growing together Stone chameleon.
I like the idea of this one it's been rattling around in my head for a while and I've written it down in various forms can't quite settle on the finished version though maybe I should ask for some input ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I really like the comparison of the changing colors to the chameleon but chameleons have no place on a rainy sidewalk so it's kind of a weird connection and it also reminds me of painting so yeah rain painted chameleon sidewalk mess hahaha...
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Mar 17, 2020
Mar 17, 2020 at 11:30 AM UTC
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