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valiantly, the Ship Fought. many Days, she took a pounding her mighty Hull bracing; against unforgiving Seas her thick Armour; withstanding Bombardment. the first great Wave knocked a Rivet loose, a Steel Plate dented by the first big Bomb she didn't Shoot back ever hoping for peaceful resolve but the Seas and the Bombs all took their toll! the first 3 enemy Ships packed their Punch but she stood firm armour deflecting every Bomb but the Sea grew Dark; the very Water that held her aloft now threatened her very Existence! the Sea destroyed Rivets The Bombs dented armour and slowly but surely she took on Water for it is the small Rivets that hold a Ship together; small rivets that Bind Metal Plates and when the Rivets fail the Ship is lost! Noble Captain stood on deck the death of His Ship a mathematical Certainty again and again the 3 locust ships fired again and again the Sea pounded the Evacuation order needs to come soon only the Captain to remain with a final solemn Duty for a captain goes down with his ship when all others are safe. the Sea will calm down the 3 will stop firing once the Bow of the Ship slips beneath the Waves the Charges set, ready to blow, scuttle the ship - Down she will go Captain salutes Her a fine Ship she's been as he presses his Pistol to his temple right finger on the trigger the left on the bomb's fuse, A solitary tear, 3,2,1...
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Aug 1, 2014
Aug 1, 2014 at 9:13 PM UTC
Battleship
valiantly, the Ship Fought. many Days, she took a pounding her mighty Hull bracing; against unforgiving Seas her thick Armour; withstanding Bombardment. the first great Wave knocked a Rivet loose, a Steel Plate dented by the first big Bomb she didn't Shoot back ever hoping for peaceful resolve but the Seas and the Bombs all took their toll! the first 3 enemy Ships packed their Punch but she stood firm armour deflecting every Bomb but the Sea grew Dark; the very Water that held her aloft now threatened her very Existence! the Sea destroyed Rivets The Bombs dented armour and slowly but surely she took on Water for it is the small Rivets that hold a Ship together; small rivets that Bind Metal Plates and when the Rivets fail the Ship is lost! Noble Captain stood on deck the death of His Ship a mathematical Certainty again and again the 3 locust ships fired again and again the Sea pounded the Evacuation order needs to come soon only the Captain to remain with a final solemn Duty for a captain goes down with his ship when all others are safe. the Sea will calm down the 3 will stop firing once the Bow of the Ship slips beneath the Waves the Charges set, ready to blow, scuttle the ship - Down she will go Captain salutes Her a fine Ship she's been as he presses his Pistol to his temple right finger on the trigger the left on the bomb's fuse, A solitary tear, 3,2,1...
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Aug 1, 2014
Aug 1, 2014 at 9:13 PM UTC
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