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A flow of ancient air by chance Passed through the lattice of awareness Confusing its framework Thoughts no longer held together tight The strands of understanding What felt certain as day, as night Lost its grip in coherence of doubt Lost its rhythm exploring The presence of untamed dimension The soul remembered its song Recognizing the imbued deception How a moment transforms the path Resurrecting fire's desire Transcending heart's breath And laying bare injected truths.
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Aug 24, 2025
Aug 24, 2025 at 12:28 AM UTC
Consciousness Revised
A flow of ancient air by chance Passed through the lattice of awareness Confusing its framework Thoughts no longer held together tight The strands of understanding What felt certain as day, as night Lost its grip in coherence of doubt Lost its rhythm exploring The presence of untamed dimension The soul remembered its song Recognizing the imbued deception How a moment transforms the path Resurrecting fire's desire Transcending heart's breath And laying bare injected truths.
bijan-rabiee
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71/M/Iran
Aug 24, 2025
Aug 24, 2025 at 12:28 AM UTC
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