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*LAUNDROMAT SONGS "How long shall they **** our prophets as we stand aside and look?” ‑‑ Bob Marley Saturday morning, the scene's the same round and round suds and foam, round and round energetic flashes of life play, giggle and roam. "Can I have a quarter to play video games? Hey mom, can I get a soda and some chips?" ~~~~~ It's always bedlam, even at 3 am, always the same neighborhood faces some smiling, others wrinkled like clothes with a stain problem. Clothes and lives sharing destinies. ***** clothes, old and worn, ***** hard driven lives. Both, beat and torn, both trying to get clean fresh from this bone weariness reflected like patched knees, lost buttons, mismatched sox or those brown streaked undies, reflecting our brown stained lives. ~~~~~ Round and round go the clothes. Round and round so goes our lives that no matter what we do seems always in need of mending. Round and round women, kids and clothes in tow. Men, if there, in the background, begrudgingly, but always fighting for control. ~~~~~ Sometimes though the juke wails joyful music prevails causing feet to tap and lips to smile. Maybe some Miles or hip hop Coup announce a new rinse cycle. Some young'un dropped the coin but you can see all are keeping time with these way out songs. Finally, eyes reveal hidden, no more suppressed, revelry, clothes are folded musically. The kid knows his tunes, out jumps a "classic"; "Redemption Songs". Marley at his best conscious style, a request. "Won't you help me sing these songs of freedom. Redemption songs. They're all I ever had redemption songs." ~~~~~ You can see it in lint filled air swirling, eyes gleaming, kids screaming; you can taste the hope and dreams. A joyous hunger of patched jeans, men and women sway in unison. For 3 minutes, 25 seconds, on this very early morn, the possibilities of relations rinsed clean of men and women folding clothes smelling fresh, wishing for a better way. ~~~~~ It is only a glimpse this Saturday morning. A round and round scene that holds promise as old, worn clothes wash, spin, dry and leave refreshed, clean. On this morn a few eyes, alert wishful, leave singing; "Redemption songs, they're all I ever had, these songs of freedom." ~~redzone 5.22.99~~ (posted by Aztec Warrior writing as redzone)*
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Feb 14, 2016
Feb 14, 2016 at 12:11 PM UTC
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*LAUNDROMAT SONGS "How long shall they **** our prophets as we stand aside and look?” ‑‑ Bob Marley Saturday morning, the scene's the same round and round suds and foam, round and round energetic flashes of life play, giggle and roam. "Can I have a quarter to play video games? Hey mom, can I get a soda and some chips?" ~~~~~ It's always bedlam, even at 3 am, always the same neighborhood faces some smiling, others wrinkled like clothes with a stain problem. Clothes and lives sharing destinies. ***** clothes, old and worn, ***** hard driven lives. Both, beat and torn, both trying to get clean fresh from this bone weariness reflected like patched knees, lost buttons, mismatched sox or those brown streaked undies, reflecting our brown stained lives. ~~~~~ Round and round go the clothes. Round and round so goes our lives that no matter what we do seems always in need of mending. Round and round women, kids and clothes in tow. Men, if there, in the background, begrudgingly, but always fighting for control. ~~~~~ Sometimes though the juke wails joyful music prevails causing feet to tap and lips to smile. Maybe some Miles or hip hop Coup announce a new rinse cycle. Some young'un dropped the coin but you can see all are keeping time with these way out songs. Finally, eyes reveal hidden, no more suppressed, revelry, clothes are folded musically. The kid knows his tunes, out jumps a "classic"; "Redemption Songs". Marley at his best conscious style, a request. "Won't you help me sing these songs of freedom. Redemption songs. They're all I ever had redemption songs." ~~~~~ You can see it in lint filled air swirling, eyes gleaming, kids screaming; you can taste the hope and dreams. A joyous hunger of patched jeans, men and women sway in unison. For 3 minutes, 25 seconds, on this very early morn, the possibilities of relations rinsed clean of men and women folding clothes smelling fresh, wishing for a better way. ~~~~~ It is only a glimpse this Saturday morning. A round and round scene that holds promise as old, worn clothes wash, spin, dry and leave refreshed, clean. On this morn a few eyes, alert wishful, leave singing; "Redemption songs, they're all I ever had, these songs of freedom." ~~redzone 5.22.99~~ (posted by Aztec Warrior writing as redzone)*
This is a poem I wrote a while ago. I thought it was a different kind of Valentine's Day card. I hope you enjoy. The music is Bob Marley's "Redemption Songs" https://youtu.be/QrY9eHkXTa4
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Feb 14, 2016 at 12:11 PM UTC
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