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I stood in the door way as he put his coat on he said "let's go. I don't know what you're waiting on." our son was babbling so I playfully babbled with him "don't repeat him. he knows how to say 'ah.' teach him real words." he pulled the car in front of the store I thought he was waiting for someone to cross the road "GO. what are you ******* sitting there for?" he drove past the turn I remained silent "thanks for reminding me to ******* turn there so we could go to the office" I get back in the car with the slip that says I owe 32 hours of community service or we lose our tenancy "I don't even know why you stopped going. all you do is sit around and do ******* nothing all day, instead of looking for a real job." days like this are offering a lot less than glitter and gold I should have something brave and hopeful to respond with but I don't this isn't a poem this is the truth but I won't do much else with it than write about it 'cause the talking don't help & it usually leaves me a lot worse off anyway how was your day, honey?
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Feb 7, 2012
Feb 7, 2012 at 3:16 PM UTC
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I stood in the door way as he put his coat on he said "let's go. I don't know what you're waiting on." our son was babbling so I playfully babbled with him "don't repeat him. he knows how to say 'ah.' teach him real words." he pulled the car in front of the store I thought he was waiting for someone to cross the road "GO. what are you ******* sitting there for?" he drove past the turn I remained silent "thanks for reminding me to ******* turn there so we could go to the office" I get back in the car with the slip that says I owe 32 hours of community service or we lose our tenancy "I don't even know why you stopped going. all you do is sit around and do ******* nothing all day, instead of looking for a real job." days like this are offering a lot less than glitter and gold I should have something brave and hopeful to respond with but I don't this isn't a poem this is the truth but I won't do much else with it than write about it 'cause the talking don't help & it usually leaves me a lot worse off anyway how was your day, honey?
jml90
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Feb 7, 2012
Feb 7, 2012 at 3:16 PM UTC
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