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I (used to think I) love(d) someone. *Daaaaamn, check her out! Yo, that ***** is* VERY PRETTY! I (know better than to) believe that nothing is impossible. Maaaan, I would  HOLD THE DOOR OPEN FOR  that chick all night long, if y'know what I mean. I (pretend to) listen to what other people have to say. I hear ya, but me personly, what I'd like to do is  MEET HER PARENTS  while wearin' A NICE SUIT  and have a  PLEASANT EVENING WITH STIMULATING CONVERSATION. I've (given up on all my) dreams and ambitions. Maybe even bring  A BOTTLE OF VINTAGE WINE  so that I could really  MAKE A GOOD IMPRESSION, if you know what I'm sayin'. I want to (believe there's no point in trying to) make the world a better place. **** bro, you are one*  RESPECTABLE AND STAND-UP  ************ you know that?*
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Jun 10, 2016
Jun 10, 2016 at 9:57 PM UTC
Mixed Messages (Corrected)*
I (used to think I) love(d) someone. *Daaaaamn, check her out! Yo, that ***** is* VERY PRETTY! I (know better than to) believe that nothing is impossible. Maaaan, I would  HOLD THE DOOR OPEN FOR  that chick all night long, if y'know what I mean. I (pretend to) listen to what other people have to say. I hear ya, but me personly, what I'd like to do is  MEET HER PARENTS  while wearin' A NICE SUIT  and have a  PLEASANT EVENING WITH STIMULATING CONVERSATION. I've (given up on all my) dreams and ambitions. Maybe even bring  A BOTTLE OF VINTAGE WINE  so that I could really  MAKE A GOOD IMPRESSION, if you know what I'm sayin'. I want to (believe there's no point in trying to) make the world a better place. **** bro, you are one*  RESPECTABLE AND STAND-UP  ************ you know that?*
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JDK
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Jun 10, 2016
Jun 10, 2016 at 9:57 PM UTC
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