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6.02 a.m. sunlight pries your eyes open and i meet you for the ****** time again and again nothing mends and breaks my heart more than watching you fall in love with a novel fragment of me every day 9.35 a.m. i toast bread with both eyes closed and i let them char like the edges of my heart you tell me last thursday's joke but i erupt into hilarity, anyway 3.17 p.m. nostalgia is a side-effect of forgetting you reminisce about knitting parties we never threw between giggles, i wonder how your words are needles that pick all of the right places 7.43 p.m. this world is a stygian dystopia but you, you are my sole scintilla of colour i feed you blatant lies for dinner only to let you sleep with a peace of mind 11.59 p.m. i watch you fall asleep to the rhythm of my silence there are all types of silences and distances but this this is the worst kind please, don't forget to remember me.
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Jun 10, 2014
Jun 10, 2014 at 3:58 AM UTC
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6.02 a.m. sunlight pries your eyes open and i meet you for the ****** time again and again nothing mends and breaks my heart more than watching you fall in love with a novel fragment of me every day 9.35 a.m. i toast bread with both eyes closed and i let them char like the edges of my heart you tell me last thursday's joke but i erupt into hilarity, anyway 3.17 p.m. nostalgia is a side-effect of forgetting you reminisce about knitting parties we never threw between giggles, i wonder how your words are needles that pick all of the right places 7.43 p.m. this world is a stygian dystopia but you, you are my sole scintilla of colour i feed you blatant lies for dinner only to let you sleep with a peace of mind 11.59 p.m. i watch you fall asleep to the rhythm of my silence there are all types of silences and distances but this this is the worst kind please, don't forget to remember me.
hey guys, I'd really, really appreciate some feedback on this one! Constructive criticism is more than welcome. Thank you x
kimomile
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Jun 10, 2014
Jun 10, 2014 at 3:58 AM UTC
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