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Go down the hill in Stormy Weather, up by the canal there's a bottle of Whiskey, and no one actually likes whiskey. Step within the slabs of the pavement as you walk up the hill: Order constraint. and yet: it's touching on a disobedience. only use it in moderation: order significance. and i find - don't try to listen; the music is so important because the Silence is what matters. jazz is not about the music; it's about the feeling, and in the same way, as is Scotch Quarry Urban Park: that, i don't need to: but i can and therefore i Will; that order makes it uniquely mine; Value is entirely Perception: so Order it; don't let it order You.
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Oct 6, 2025
Oct 6, 2025 at 3:41 PM UTC
Scotch Quarry Urban Park
Go down the hill in Stormy Weather, up by the canal there's a bottle of Whiskey, and no one actually likes whiskey. Step within the slabs of the pavement as you walk up the hill: Order constraint. and yet: it's touching on a disobedience. only use it in moderation: order significance. and i find - don't try to listen; the music is so important because the Silence is what matters. jazz is not about the music; it's about the feeling, and in the same way, as is Scotch Quarry Urban Park: that, i don't need to: but i can and therefore i Will; that order makes it uniquely mine; Value is entirely Perception: so Order it; don't let it order You.
When you take advantage of inconsequential liberties, it values those Liberties, and makes them uniquely Yours; a privilege and poetry that you'll enjoy I guarantee.
rnaeo
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16/M/United Kingdom
Oct 6, 2025
Oct 6, 2025 at 3:41 PM UTC
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