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I wish I could capture the moment We exchange glances and smiles      Creating sparks,                      and fireworks,                                    and fireflies. Admiring you for what seems to be an eternity Captivated by your face and beauty. How the sunlight adds a perfect glow to your skin      Defining each curve,                      and each lines,                                    of your face and body. Unconciously staring at you in just pure adoration Unable to fathom your perfection. How the dead silence brings yourself out perfectly      Hands in your pockets,                      your lips sealed tightly,                                    dimples showing slightly. Mesmerized at your sweet, kindly, innocent acts Is there anything that you lack? How your flaws makes you as perfect as can be      Postured restlessly,                                          beauty mark on your back,                                    messy hair swaying swiftly. You're soft-spoken within such a great humbleness Doesn't change you nonetheless! How unawareness effortlessly makes you perfect      "Angelic-like music,"                      "striking like static,"                                    "scars are beauty from tragic," You see the good in everyone me being one, yet- You don't realize how beautiful you are And that's what makes you perfect even from afar. -djs
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Jun 9, 2013
Jun 9, 2013 at 11:00 AM UTC
Unaware of Perfection
I wish I could capture the moment We exchange glances and smiles      Creating sparks,                      and fireworks,                                    and fireflies. Admiring you for what seems to be an eternity Captivated by your face and beauty. How the sunlight adds a perfect glow to your skin      Defining each curve,                      and each lines,                                    of your face and body. Unconciously staring at you in just pure adoration Unable to fathom your perfection. How the dead silence brings yourself out perfectly      Hands in your pockets,                      your lips sealed tightly,                                    dimples showing slightly. Mesmerized at your sweet, kindly, innocent acts Is there anything that you lack? How your flaws makes you as perfect as can be      Postured restlessly,                                          beauty mark on your back,                                    messy hair swaying swiftly. You're soft-spoken within such a great humbleness Doesn't change you nonetheless! How unawareness effortlessly makes you perfect      "Angelic-like music,"                      "striking like static,"                                    "scars are beauty from tragic," You see the good in everyone me being one, yet- You don't realize how beautiful you are And that's what makes you perfect even from afar. -djs
Every saturday, I see this boy at church, and I'm always a few seats behind him. Every time, I wish I could just put the moment into words, and now I finally have. Maybe it's the atmosphere, or his unawareness, or the fact that he doesn't know someone's admirably looking at him. It's the little things like how he's unaware of his perfection, and that's what makes him perfect. Humbleness is beautiful.
djs
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Jun 9, 2013
Jun 9, 2013 at 11:00 AM UTC
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