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Past, i saw you crossing  roaring rivers and climbing snow clad mountains, taking long walks through prestine landscapes, or loosing completely in  ecstatic rain dances, But, when i sought you, and after long last, found you there, where you were hiding in disguise, like a refugee, whose passport was lost-- you were, mostly eliminated, like a map, eaten by hungry moths , vastly altered by time, the great forger hiding in my own attic, drastically cut, particularly at corners, like a cake eaten by greedy cats, totally sanitised, clumsily cleaned, shades of dark completely erased, unknowing it's value, to create contrast foolishly whitened, throwing  sense of aesthetics, on the way side. I can see frills attached without any rhyme or reason, specifics, misinerpreted in many unwanted places, dark lines of interference, criss crossed, killing the  pleasure of recollection. And,  what is  the precious left over? do i see anything significant at all? your this avatar, i would have gladly submitted to  Herr Alzeimer's what i see before mind's eye is delicately positioned, ambiguity has taken active control, effectively of  all details, i stand aghast, close my eyes and try to answer the question that arises: "who exactly is this? the memories reappearing as a ghost to bring me  back to senses, and make me come in  terms, with what has passed for ever?"                                        #
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Feb 24, 2012
Feb 24, 2012 at 12:27 PM UTC
The ghost of the past
Past, i saw you crossing  roaring rivers and climbing snow clad mountains, taking long walks through prestine landscapes, or loosing completely in  ecstatic rain dances, But, when i sought you, and after long last, found you there, where you were hiding in disguise, like a refugee, whose passport was lost-- you were, mostly eliminated, like a map, eaten by hungry moths , vastly altered by time, the great forger hiding in my own attic, drastically cut, particularly at corners, like a cake eaten by greedy cats, totally sanitised, clumsily cleaned, shades of dark completely erased, unknowing it's value, to create contrast foolishly whitened, throwing  sense of aesthetics, on the way side. I can see frills attached without any rhyme or reason, specifics, misinerpreted in many unwanted places, dark lines of interference, criss crossed, killing the  pleasure of recollection. And,  what is  the precious left over? do i see anything significant at all? your this avatar, i would have gladly submitted to  Herr Alzeimer's what i see before mind's eye is delicately positioned, ambiguity has taken active control, effectively of  all details, i stand aghast, close my eyes and try to answer the question that arises: "who exactly is this? the memories reappearing as a ghost to bring me  back to senses, and make me come in  terms, with what has passed for ever?"                                        #
k-balachandran
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Feb 24, 2012
Feb 24, 2012 at 12:27 PM UTC
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