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How do I compare you to the wonders of the world When you surpass even the most lovely of sunsets? If the stars shine, then your eyes illuminate. If a fire be warm, then your smile is ardent. A California riverbed sparkles with scattered gold, But your laugh becomes the lucent wind, gilded by the chimes, glinting off the dusk sky. I have seen my share of faceless beauty, But never one who knows the hand of Both Aphrodite and Athena effortlessly paired. Your flaw, if there be one, is the ocean’s deep bed, Unknown, hidden and shouldered in the dark. Might I drown before I learn this mystery? I think not, but if indeed, know I float adjacent, Shoulder bruised and ruby eyes searching. Wonders of the world, vast and stunning, Like the fragile delicacy of a butterfly wing and The resonating echo of a growl in the hollow cave; You are a wonder unparalleled and unequaled. How lucky am I to explore the marvel of your being?
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Apr 13, 2015
Apr 13, 2015 at 11:10 AM UTC
My Peronsal Wonder of this World
How do I compare you to the wonders of the world When you surpass even the most lovely of sunsets? If the stars shine, then your eyes illuminate. If a fire be warm, then your smile is ardent. A California riverbed sparkles with scattered gold, But your laugh becomes the lucent wind, gilded by the chimes, glinting off the dusk sky. I have seen my share of faceless beauty, But never one who knows the hand of Both Aphrodite and Athena effortlessly paired. Your flaw, if there be one, is the ocean’s deep bed, Unknown, hidden and shouldered in the dark. Might I drown before I learn this mystery? I think not, but if indeed, know I float adjacent, Shoulder bruised and ruby eyes searching. Wonders of the world, vast and stunning, Like the fragile delicacy of a butterfly wing and The resonating echo of a growl in the hollow cave; You are a wonder unparalleled and unequaled. How lucky am I to explore the marvel of your being?
(5 of 10) I love you, my friend. <3
c-e-smith
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Apr 13, 2015
Apr 13, 2015 at 11:10 AM UTC
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